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Doug@D_M_W
June 25, 2020

It took my boss over 30 minutes on the phone with me to feel she had adequately explained that an email I had drafted was too wordy. Apparently I overexplain things and don't get to the point fast enough.

She then emailed me an example of what she would have written. It was 64 words shorter.

"People don't read past the first two lines of a paragraph!"

To myself: "No, YOU don't read past the first two lines of a paragraph."

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Hello new followers, I hope I don’t disappoint you. I want this place to feel like home, where we can escape the Thunderdome and process the world. Where we can post dog pics and recipes and book recommendations. Where we support each other as we get sober, lose weight, embark on new business opportunities, creative endeavors, relationships and travels. I want this to be your oasis of sanity and laughter in an increasingly mad world. A creative outlet where you can share your spirit with us.

We might not have any control over the news cycle—but we can control our habits and attitude. It all starts with us. And hopefully a little piece of that will start here.

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